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I'm not looking for line edits rather I just want some honest story feedback. I want someone to tell me if my actual story is good or not. If you’re surprised and sad or happy! I can no longer be objective about my work, because I have looked at it for too long and don’t know if it’s good or bad, I’ve stopped being able to spot mistakes, and I know it too well. I need objective, honest, new thoughts and I can offer you honest constructive feedback in return.
Let's swap the first couple of chapters and if we don't work best of luck for the future, no hard feelings? If we do work, I promise I'll put a lot of effort in to improving both our manuscripts!
I’m writing contemporary YA.
I like dark, angsty, contemporary, YA fiction with real snarky characters.
My novel is complete at 82,000 words and here's a bit about it:
One year. Two POVs. Three siblings. After the death of their parents Darren is trying to raise his siblings. He watches young Liz grow up, and teen Max fall apart. Max’s biggest problem is pretending he’s fine. As far as he’s concerned, the bullying, the guilt he carries, and the self-harm are all secondary issues to keeping Darren in the dark...
Straight out romance, especially flowery romance! I like realistic people with realistic friendships and stories that are bigger than just finding love. I'm also not really one for fantasy, horror, or crime but if I am attracted to the themes enough would be happy to read.
Some books I love are:
They Both Die at the End
Love Simon
More Than We Can Tell
A List of Cages
The View on the Way Down
It’s Kind of a Funny Story
I’ll Give You the Sun
We Are the Ants
The Shock of the Fall
Everybody Sees The Ants
Troublemakers
Currently reading Chaos Walking
I read fanfiction. I prefer TV series to films but I like going to the cinema. I'm a Ravenclaw. I'm a sucker for a funny meme. I'm a sucker for a good gimmick. I'm a sucker for brightly coloured pens. I'm untidy. Dogs over cats!
I eventually want to write New Adult but I'm working on trying to break into YA first.
Just message me if there is anything you want to know!
