Brehonna Franklin

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I'm a web designer writing an Epic Fantasy series called The Kemdi Legacy, and other works.


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About
Brehonna
Franklin
Female
United States
Oklahoma
18-29
Writing Experience
intermediate-unpublished
new-adult, web-blog, young-adult
contemporary-fiction, fantasy, mythology-folklore
Writing Interests

I'm wanting honest feedback in the following areas:
#1 Did the story hold your interest from the very beginning? If not, why not?

#2 Did you get oriented fairly quickly at the beginning as to whose story it is, and where and when it’s taking place? If not, why not?

#3 Could you relate to the main character? Nonfiction: did you understand the authors reason for writing the book? Did you feel her/his pain or excitement?

#4 Did the setting interest you and did the descriptions seem vivid and real to you?

#5 Was there a point at which you felt the story lagged or you became less than excited about finding out what was going to happen next? Where, exactly?

#6 Were there any parts that confused you? Or even frustrated or annoyed you? Which parts, and why?

I'm currently working on an NA Epic Fantasy series, but I'm also working on/interested in Sci-Fi and Contemporary Fiction.

I don't feel I'm the best person to critique mystery, romance, historical fiction or thriller novels.

Kristin Cashore's Graceling Series, Game of Thrones, Hunger Games

I'm working on becoming an illustrator as well.